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Sasuke....huh....Sasuke Uchiha....

I walked down a path alone. It was the way back to Konohanagure. I had been training, alone as usual. Shikamaru had told all of my old class mates to meet up so we could discuss Sasuke. What about Sasuke? What did we need to talk about? He left.

He left.... 2 years ago.

He almost killed Naruto. I hate him for it.

I care about Sasuke. I'm Naruto's friend. I support what he's doing full tilt. I'd like to see him bring Sasuke back. It'd heal Sakura and Ino. It'd heal all of us.

I don't care about him. He's hurt Sakura, Ino, Shikamaru, Kiba, Choji, Neji, Lee...everyone. Epically Naruto. Why does Naruto care so much? All he did was hurt him.

Oh Naruto. Why do you care so much? I care about you. I want your happiness. And if that happiness is getting Sasuke back so be it. I'll help you.

Naruto had gone to plead to the Raikage so Sasuke wouldn't be marked criminal and killed.
I fear he doesn't have a chance.

I can't help remember the times I spoke to Sasuke. When I sparred with him.


"Hey Uchiha." I walked up to the raven haired boy.

"What do you want?" he challenged

"Woah, take a chill Uchiha. I just wanted to ask if you'd spar with me is all. I need to work on hand-to-hand combat."

"No find another loser, like Naruto to help you with that." Sasuke turned and walked away before he had gone 5 paces I said, "A loser who's going to surpass you."

He turned sharply and looked at me, "What?"

"You heard me. He's going to surpass you, and become Hokage." I told him firmly

Sasuke flipped his hair out of his eyes and smirked, "That loser? HA! You make me laugh (Name). As if that loser could anything but a loser. Once a loser always a loser."

"Don't give me that crap! You know what he can do! He's going to be a great ninja! You'll see!"

"I'd like to see you prove me wrong." Sasuke turned to walk away again

"Fight me." Is all I said and started trying to hit him.

Of course he blocks easily but he didn't know that I had really tried to hurt him. he realized I was serious soon enough. It was all he could do to not get a bruise. He started to hit back after he realized he wasn't getting away from me.
At the end of it all we were laying on the ground next to each other covered in scratches, bruises, cut, and panting heavily. I had almost no chakra left. I felt it was the same to him. We were both exhausted.

"Tie?" I asked panting

"Tie" he agreed quickly. If he wanted to prove himself the winner he had to knock me out and he didn't have the energy to do so.

"You're [pant] not bad Uchiha, I'll give that to you [pant]."

"You're not [pant] half bad either (Name) [pant]." He replied smiling ever so slightly

"Oh? [pant] Did the great Uchiha just [pant] admit I'm good?" I grinned

"No shut up." He frowned while I laughed openly

"You're a loser. Stop laughing." Sasuke snapped

I smiled at him, "You can't admit it when I'm good huh? Takes a lot right? You want to be on top because you need to know if you're strong. And you to need to know because of your "goal". Yes I know who it is and why." I close my eyes and wait for him to berate me, to get up and leave, to get mad.

Yet it was met with silence.

I looked at him and he was staring at me steadily.

"What?" I ask

"You're seem to understand... Hn. Whatever. Bye I'm leaving." Sasuke got up and walked

"Hm stubborn boy," I muttered then yelled "Hey! Next time it won't be a tie!"

"Yes. I'll win next time." Sasuke turned his head slightly and had a small smile on it.

"As if!" I shouted and got to run up to him and argued with him the whole way back....


I stopped walking and put a hand over my eyes. I had just realized something...something very very bad. I started running as fast as I could. I couldn't believe it. I need to move to clear my head.


"Ready to start practice?" I asked Sasuke who was retightening his shoe straps.

We had been meeting every Tuesday to practice. No one knew. It was just us.


“Alright then here I come!” I started in on him throwing punches and chops and kicks where I could.

Sasuke of course blocked them all. Nothing unusual.

He brought his fist back in a swing to my head and I bent backward to avoid it. He kicked his legs under my legs. I fell to the ground landing on my butt with Sasuke standing over me.

“Screw you Uchiha.” I told him rubbing my backside.

He just looked at me. I could tell he was thinking.

“What’s on your mind Sasuke, you know other than that hair of yours.” I joked

“Nothing a loser should be concerned about.” Sasuke snapped

“Depends, if you think I’m a loser. Well?” I asked him. I expected him to promptly say yes, to say that I was the biggest loser on this planet. But he said nothing.

He finally spoke but it was so quiet I could hear him. His face was red.

“What was that?”

“I… forget it. Why should I say it?”

“Because you said it before. And I want to hear you clearly.”

“…Idiot,” He pulled me up and into his arms and held tight.

“….Sasuke what the heck?”

“I like you… (Name).” Then he pushed me away and placed a hand over his eyes. His face
was all red.

“….Idiot, jerk, proud, smug, vain, overly confidant…. I used to think that about you whenever I saw you. But now….I don’t know what to think.” I placed a hand to my eyes.

“I think I like you too Sasuke.”

His head shot up. And his face cleared. For a small moment of about a second I saw a true smile on his face. Then it was gone.

~ could I be so stupid?

All this time. I'm such a fool

I was in love with Sasuke Uchiha. Perhaps I still am...


"(Name) what do you think?" Shikamaru asked me.
We had all met to discuss Sasuke. Ino was silent the entire time. Everyone else contributed a little. I didn't say a word though.

"..... I will say this: Sasuke is hatred and darkness. Naruto is love and lightness. And no matter how dark or how damp...darkness always yearns for light. Naruto and Sasuke are bound by a bond. For Sasuke it is hatred for Naruto it is friendship. And no matter what, friendship is stronger. Ever so much more stronger."

Shikamaru began to speak,  "Even so, we can't let him go around and kill even more people, it's--"

"When did you forsake yourselves to this and Sasuke too? Why does it need to come to this?" I turned and began to walk away, "I will take no part in your plot. The only person who can kill or bring Sasuke back is Naruto. You seem to forget that."

"What a dreamer." I heard Kiba mutter

"Yes I am a dreamer. I have a dream where Sasuke comes back and Naruto with him. I am no fool. I know that is unlikely to happen. But that won't stop me from doing everything in my power to make it a reality."

Sasuke you idiot. You see what you have me saying? I'm going soft. Bakayaro. I love you. Even though I know you're not the same boy I fell for all those years ago. Hm. I hate the fact that I can’t let you go.

“So you’re leaving?” I asked him I stood in front of him just outside the village.

“Yes. And you can’t stop me.”

“You mean you don’t want me to stop you. Sasuke I know you better than anybody. All you want is the power to kill Itachi-”

“DON’T SAY HIS NAME!” Sasuke hissed at me.

“I can and will. You can gain power here too. Orochimaru gain his power here, Tsunade got her power here! Master Jiriaya got his power here! You can gain more if you stay idiot.” I growled at him

“Why do you care so much (Name)? I thought you of all people would understand!” Sasuke ran a hand through his hair in annoyance.

“Because…well I like you and you like me. You told me so and I told you so. And that isn’t going to change. So I’m here to tell you that there’s another option. If you don’t see it then you can leave. I won’t stop you.” I bowed my head because I felt tears pricking my eyes. I didn’t want him to see weakness.

“I’m leaving.” I raised my head and watched him walk away.

“Goodbye…” I muttered and in a blur of moment he was in front of me. So close that I could see his pupils in his dark eyes.

“(Name) thank you. Goodbye.” I felt a small pressure on my lips then he struck me on the head and I fell emotionless. I realized a split-second before everything went black that he had knocked me out…

Sasuke Uchiha. Darn you. Darn the fact that I love you.


I do not own Sasuke Uchiha or NARUTO. NARUTO is owned by including but not limited to Masashi Kishimoto, VIZ meadia, and TV Tokyo. Please support the official release of manga chapters and anime episodes.
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jeweliane Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
John Cena agreed with you icon  Well Done! Bravo! Wooooooo!
DDandYang Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The feels!
tachibanasumire Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2015
pretty good one *smirk* so.. sasuke still like the reader right ?
Saku315 Featured By Owner May 17, 2015
You should add another part where the reader ends up with Naruto and Sasuke realizes what he lost when he succumbed to his urges~ *^*
AlexandriaLiristis Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2015
Gigglesalotneko Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
This was too saddddd
:'( WAAAAAH this is sad :'(
BatPonyForever24 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
CarmenBiat Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2014  Student Artist
XD :iconmoarplz:
mirathomson Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
tylrael Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014  Student Artisan Crafter
Dat picture doh! XD
SilverCryMeep Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014
Nice picture up there. 
SatoshiandMayu4Ever Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Aww... that's cute!! <3
narutoEATsasuke Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
MiyokaChan Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Student Artist
wow this made my straight, poker face twitch a smile
Lilli-Says-No Featured By Owner May 10, 2014
MiyokaChan Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Student Artist
You know what it is?
Lilli-Says-No Featured By Owner May 24, 2014
It's The Kitten That Fallowed Rose Around For Awhile.
MiyokaChan Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Student Artist
XD I love you now bro! Wait. Shoot jjinhinihznihenhxcihnhknckhnhcs
coolstuntgirl1 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Student Artist
Sure this story made some people their day add this ok sooty for the spaces

trust me this will put a smile on your face, make your day, or help you 

Every night , someone thinks about you before

they go to sleep,

At least fifteen people in this

world love you.

The only reason someone would ever hate you is

because they want to be

just like you

There are at least two people in this world that

would die



You mean the world to someone.

Someone that you don't even know




When you make the biggest mistake ever,

something good comes from it.

When you think the world has turned its back on

you, take a


Always remember the compliments you've received.

Forget the rude remarks.

So if you are a loving friend, send this


everyone on your list


the person that sent it to you.



midnight your true love will


they like


Something good will happen to you between 12 in the morning


four o'clock pm


it could be anywere . Get ready for the biggest

shock in your


If you break this chain YOU will be cursed with

relationship problems


the next ten years . Send this to fifteen people

in fifteen minutes !!

Make Someone else's day! Help get a smile on someone's face! Help someone out! <3 remember that your loved

F.R.I.E.N.D.S. 😉
= Fight for you 
= Respect you
= Involve you
= Encourage you 
= Deserve you 
= Save you
Send this to all your friends & me if I'm one......If you get 4 back u r liked but if u get 7 back then u r seriously loved

Inugirl115 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014
Are you going to continue?
WaveWatch5128 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Student Artisan Crafter
Amazing it sounds like I would if I was her.
Cherrywind101 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is cute! XD Good job! XD
Jaquiekuro14 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Student Artist
Awwwww, I really wish it could cont., I love this!!! So angisty!!
katariandsasori Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013
AngelX1300 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013
😍 * fangirls *
AngelX1300 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013
😍 * fangirls *
AkasunaNoShiori Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013
there should be more to this story I feel like it should continue
EnelyaWolfwood Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
WaveWatch5128 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Student Artisan Crafter
I love your profile picture EnelyaWolfwood.
EnelyaWolfwood Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
thank you ^.^
Sakura-Ex Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Student Writer
Sorry, but it's a oneshot
Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner May 28, 2013
Love it ^w^
ninjajudai19 Featured By Owner May 6, 2013
bro this was awesome and really cute^^
stupid Sasuke for making girls feel they way they do about him ><
but other than that i really liked it
Sakura-Ex Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you! :D I tried to make him as realistic as possible!
meerkatlover27 Featured By Owner May 5, 2013
i need more!
Sakura-Ex Featured By Owner May 6, 2013  Student Writer
Sorry....I'm not making more. This is just a one shot
meerkatlover27 Featured By Owner May 6, 2013
Prussia87 Featured By Owner May 2, 2013
Oops I meant :giggle: hehehe! Not really! IM FANGIRLING OVER HERE!!! :glomp:
Prussia87 Featured By Owner May 2, 2013
CUTE!!!! :fangirl:
nany-elric Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Student General Artist
awwwwwwww cute :iconadorableplz:
y3daner Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Student Traditional Artist

This... Is just too awesome... :iconfangasmingplz:
Sakura-Ex Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Student Writer
um thank you. I wasn't sure if it was realistic or not...
y3daner Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Oh, no, it was perfect! Just perfect~!

A bit sad, but perfect~ :iconsexysasukeplz:


...I'm not exaggerating, am I?
Sakura-Ex Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Student Writer
Yes I think you are
y3daner Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Student Traditional Artist

Sorry about that...

I really just get like that when I just read something I like...
Sakura-Ex Featured By Owner May 6, 2013  Student Writer
No prob. I just don't think I'm that good it all
y3daner Featured By Owner May 6, 2013  Student Traditional Artist

Yeah, that's the same way about how I feel with some of my works.

But sometimes I really don't care, because at least I was able to make some people happy.
JessTaylor1752 Featured By Owner May 1, 2013
I don't usually like duck butt but this story is so cute :D
Sakura-Ex Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks...I guess
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